Last work in progress overhaul

Yea, so I’m 15 pages from the end of editing, when I’m lying bed tonight realizing that something I wrote - 2 critical scenes actually - are shit.  They are medieval in the middle of a plot that’s decidedly NOT.  So I kept mulling it over and over in the shower, and I came up with how to change the scene that makes the rush toward climax almost easy.  At least easier than it is now.

It’s a good way to dispatch a character who needed to be killed, which leads to the death of another, and finally an ultimatum between Do my bidding happily or under duress.   (That’s poor writing I know, but I’ll leave the good writing for my story.)

Still thinking about restructuring the last 30 pages is killing me right now…Arg…